WALT use adjectives and paragraphs
IT’S NOT A PLANET,ITS OUR HOME I'm in hyper sleep. I have been asleep for 65 years. I start to wake up.I look through my blurry helmet it is as dirty as a dirty windscreen.
I hear my ship gliding through space it was as smooth as a car on a freshly made road.The first thing I see is the beautiful stars. It was as shiny as diamonds.
I felt my seat hugging me like a giant teddy bear It was as hard as two walls crushing me. And next the warm sun shining over my face.
I smell cake from my home, freshly baked. I taste delicious nuts in the cake. The earth it is so close my mum my dad will be there waiting there for me.
I haven't seen me family in 65 years.
The Atmosphere it is here I start to wobble and shake. I smell smoke in the air.
I walked out I was alone I saw blown up cars and nothing alive. Everything was dead the breeze was upon me it sent a shiver down my spine my family is gone I a tear dripped down my face. Nothing is here but the concrete and dead trees.
My home where has it gone?
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