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Friday, August 12, 2016

Cristiano Ronaldo

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I was the FiFa ball boy. My job is to look after the rainbow color ball. Wait, Ronaldo crosses the ball to William he shots and he scores and the crowd goes wild DONK!  My hero clashed heads with me. It was as hard as smashing me with a wrecking ball. I fell straight onto the cold hard floor felt like drunk toddler. I couldn't feel myself I felt   really strange and I went into a deep deep sleep.

I woke up in the morning by a high pitched sound it was as loud as a truck.I didn't recognize anything I was in a comfortable bed. A alarm clock was going of it was really annoying.  Beep, beep, beep I woke up I was frightened because I was not in my house. I was in a mansion.

I looked in the mirror AHHHHHHHH  I was Cristiano Ronaldo. I crept down stairs and a lady in a fancy dress gave me some keys. The keys were as shiny as diamonds they for my fast car and in my head I was thinking I CAN'T DRIVE A CAR. So I took the keys and went  into the garage. It was as shiny as  and I saw a speedy car it was a lamborghini aventador.

I turned the key and put the gear on reverse and crashed into the wall. Then the car alarm went off. I had to drive to training.

I tried to do around the world but I failed it. I looked so stupid and everybody else looked way better than me. Next we had a light jog.Then after a long day training I went to bed.Then when I woke up in the morning to a big game first we had to vs Barcelona we won 2-1 to us . Then we vs  Portugal and we scored first and the Portugal scored the soccer goal. The I chipped the ball and Lee was coming for the ball ooohh nooo!!! I slipped and I donk heads with heads. I become really confused and I suddenly realized where I  was. I was in the middle of the final of the EURO 2016. Then Ronaldo helped me up and I cheered on my team.


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  1. Hi Wiremu I like you Cristiano Ronaldo story and I like how you put lots of adjectives. It is absolutely beautiful. Have a good day or night or evening.

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