WALT write a recount focusing on using adjectives and correct punctuation.
Watch the following video of an African safari African Safari.
Now imagine that you are on the safari and describe one of your days in detail. Write it like you did the chimpanzee in space recount.
Think about what you can see all the animals, what they look like in detail, how they smell and what they would feel like. The plants, how they feel, the temperature of the sun the dusty road. Then talk about the people that you meet.
I can’t wait to read your writing and picture in my mind what you see.
Start writing here……
It was a bright sunny day. I was in a off road buggy going to see some animals. First I saw some elephants. The elephant's tusks were as white as ice. The sky is as blue as water. The trees are as green as grass. The next animal we saw was giraffes. Their necks are as long as trees. And then we saw some slippery fish in the water.
Bula Vinaka, Wiremu. My name is Reagan and I am from Mamaku 2. I really like how you have used similies in your writing. It reminded me of when we did show not tell writing and had to use similies. Were you studying Africa? From Reagan
ReplyDeleteKia ora Reagan thank you for your comment. We were learning how to use videos to help us with our writing and it is going great!
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