Riccarton House

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Riccarton House

The scary version

I  am a cleaner

  I work at night. It is really creepy I hear a loud noise at the other side of the dark corridor I ran to see what was there but it was

Ohhhh nooooo!!!!!! It is a black mouse Trying to  eat the fake food in the musty kitchen. I guess that nothing bad can happen in a night shift.

BANG BANG BANG

Ok what was that  I think it was at the creaky door. I open the squeaky door it was as hard as titanium. I looked up into the dark night and I saw nothing suddenly there was a LOUD CRASH in the Jane Deans bedroom. I was always too scared to go into the terrifying bedroom but I had too.

I crept  into the bedroom I looked around it was as dusty as heat pump filter. I looked behind the door I saw jane deans she was see through with a black dress and white skin.”. WHAT DO YOU WANT?” I asked. Jane said “I haunt this house at midnight because this is my house and it will always be my house and you MUST LEAVE AT ONCE!!!!!!”

“NO I WILL NOT”

I SAID. Then Jane chased me down the hallway. I ran for my life Jane was screaming like a high pitched choir  and it was really loud. I put my hands around my ears and ran to my car and I put some really loud music and I put on cut it.  Then I drove away. Jane Deans drove away with me to a school . It was called Hornby Primary I drove passed and Jane said” I can haunt this school.”

That's why the school toilets are HAUNTED

THE END

OR IS IT?

TO BE NOT CONTINUED